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Under all that, little brother, I still see you.

Under your heavily tattooed skin I still see the baby of the family.

Under your facial piercings I still see that cherub face.

Under those sleep deprived eyes I still see the baby blues shining through.

Under all that, little brother, I still love you.
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100 Themes Challenge - Variation 2

My little brother has just gone to university, the first in my family to actually "go" (like stay in halls and all that, I stayed at home and commuted) And I don't miss him, but I guess somewhere in my subconscious I do because this just spewed out quite soppy like :D
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MUbyGaelle's avatar
Nice. does your brother really support all those piercings and tattoes? Like the feelings seeping out of the piece.

Cheers!

Thama